Brackenwake
World atlas Chapter 05

Highlands and storms

The Stormpeaks

Highland moor into storm-struck mountains, and the riders' hall on the peak that takes the lightning.

World lore and story plans. Some places, characters and events are still in development.

The landscape

Highlands on the north shore: heather moor climbing into granite peaks, black lochs, scree, weather crossing in walls. The tops are in cloud half the day and lightning strikes the highest peak three times an hour.

The Eyrie: the dragonriders' hall cut into the lightning peak, its landing steps a hundred feet wide built for things that flew, a roost of nine stone perches around it, ghosts on every one.

Places in the Stormpeaks

11 places

Cairnfoot

Settlement

A highland village of stone and turf at the mountains' foot, sheep and a brewhouse.

Kestrel, the highlanders, the Cairn Road's start, climbing gear, mountaineering rumours

The path to the Eyrie, a cairn for every fallen rider, speaking when the storm is near.

Rider cairns, the Wall of Weather event, ogres of the Legion's mountain corps

The Legion's mountain fort in the only pass, palisade and towers.

Captain Serle Vane in command, Warden Hask's ogres, the favour from the Greenwold

The Eyrie

Great landmark

The riders' hall on the peak, the landing steps, nine stone perches, ghosts keeping watch.

Marshal Eowen Skyward's ghost, the last Dragonsworn, the old rider oath; the Roost beneath

Three levels cut into the peak down to the mounting stair.

Ogres, iron golems, wyverns, Warden Hask who cannot pass the ghosts

3 dungeon levels · Boss: Warden Hask

The Black Lochs

Wild country

Three lochs in the high glens, cold, deep, a drowned rider hall under the largest.

Fishing, wyverns, Skreel the storm wyvern's peak above

A mine driven into the lightning peak's side, silver and coldiron, humming in a storm.

Silver and coldiron, iron golems the kingdom left

A rope bridge across a chasm a thousand feet deep, invisible in cloud.

The only crossing to the Eyrie's side without the Legion Pass

A rule of this place

In the storm each lightning flash shows the bridge for a second; walk in the dark between flashes and you walk off it. After the wings, you fly it.

An iron anvil on the highest bare rock, struck by lightning every storm.

Rimesteel and coldiron can be worked here and nowhere else in the realm

A rule of this place

Put a blank on the anvil and wait for the strike; the forge is the storm, and standing beside it during the strike is a choice.

The Echo Chasm

Wild country

A gorge where a shout comes back nine times and brings the scree down.

Ogre camps on the ledges, a rider's tomb in the wall

A rule of this place

Every ability that shouts (Battle Cry, War Drum, Provoke) drops rock on whatever is under the ledge: use it, or lose your footing to it.

A riders' hall under the largest of the Black Lochs, its roof forty feet down.

Rider relics, the drowned of the Eyrie's fall, a saddle that fits a dragon

A rule of this place

A dive on one breath before the Deep is taken; the loch is cold enough to bar swimming below Swimming 40.

Encounters and events

  • Skreel, a storm wyvern that rides the lightning
  • The Wall of Weather, a storm every hour on the tops
  • The Stone Shepherd, an ogre with a flock of stoneback bears
  • Legion mountain patrols in the pass

Story and people

The story outline for the Stormpeaks, including its characters, secrets and the dragon’s journey.

Read the story outlineContains story spoilers

Arrival

Highland moor climbing into mountains, heather and granite, weather coming across it in walls. Lightning striking the same peak three times. On the peak, a ruin with wide steps built for something that landed, and a figure in a tattered cloak on the top step, waiting, translucent.

The feel

Highlands: wind, rain, scree, black lochs, storm on the tops. The mountain biome under storm sky. The Eyrie of the dragonriders on the highest peak, and the ghosts of every rider who died at the fall still keeping watch.

The story here

This is where the game says what you are. The Eyrie's ghosts are the last Dragonsworn, and they cannot rest until a living one stands on their steps. They train you, they tell you what Malachar was, and they give the dragon its wings. The Legion holds the passes below with its finest, and Captain Vane is in command, and the favour from the Greenwold comes due. The Stormpeaks are also where the player first flies, in Wyrmsoul, over a fight, and never sees the game the same way again.

The cast

  • Marshal Eowen Skyward. The last Marshal of the Eyrie, a ghost, a woman of sixty who died at forty, unbending, kind underneath in a way she has forgotten. Signature: she salutes the dragon and not you. Secret: she trained Malachar, loved him, and did not see it. She teaches the Bond's true use and gives the wings. At the Throne her ghost is on the wall, and Malachar sees her, and stops.
  • Kestrel. A living highland girl, seventeen, who has been climbing to the Eyrie every week since she was ten to leave flowers for ghosts she cannot see. Signature: she whistles the riders' recall, which the ghosts taught her in dreams. Secret: she is Skyward's great-great-granddaughter and the only one the ghosts can touch. She is the realm's living heart and the one who sees you fly first. Returns at the Throne on the back of the dragon behind you, because somebody has to.
  • Captain Serle Vane, again, in the passes, with orders to take the dragon and a memory of the boar. The player's choice with him here decides whether the Throne's door opens from inside.
  • The Storm Wyvern Skreel, an old wyvern who nests on the Eyrie's lightning peak and has learned to ride the strikes. The ghosts call it the last of their mounts' bastards. It can be fought or, after the wings, out-flown, and if out-flown it follows you and is the dragon's first friend of its own kind.

Underground and the boss

The Eyrie's Roost: the dragonriders' hall cut into the peak, three levels down to the mounting stair. Ogres of the Legion's mountain corps, iron golems, wyverns, and Warden Hask, the Legion's mountain commander, an Ogre promoted with a name and a Legion breastplate, who has been trying to break into the Roost for twenty years and cannot pass the ghosts. You can. That is the point.

Out in the open

Skreel on the peak. The Wall of Weather, an event: a storm crosses the highlands every real hour and anything on the tops in it takes lightning; anything under Wyrmsoul does not. The Cairn Road, where every cairn is a rider's grave and speaks a line if the dragon is near.

The dragon here

Eats goats and lightning, apparently. Becomes a young dragon here: the player rides it down from the Eyrie. Takes back wings.

The Boneyard